Showing posts with label Core 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Core 4. Show all posts

Thursday, November 6, 2014

WRITER SHOWCASE: Character Sketches


The ChallengeCreate a "round" character; place them in a scene and, in 200 words or less, create a vivid snapshot of who they are.

The Winners:

Megan, Core 3

A girl stood peacefully at the edge of the brick wall. He watched her, mesmerized as her hair  floated and sparkled in the sunlight. She was folded over a thick book, absentmindedly running a gentle finger down the side of the page. The nape of her neck was exposed by the wind’s bitter breath; auburn locks flashed and glittered against the white snow backdrop until they settled back into a twirled column.  Her hair…twisted into a shiny ponytail with a thick, elastic tie. He was amazed the band had such a strong grip. He was jealous too, for he longed to hold someone with the same amount of force and security the rubber circle did.


Asher, Core 4


I looked at the boy with pity. As a principal, I like to see whether new kids are trouble or not. This kid was the troubled one. His tan skin was weatherbeaten, like he worked too much. Due to his working life he had grown very strong. Another strange thing about him was that he only had one eye. The other replaced with an eyepatch and a scar running across his face. Obviously this kid was beaten up by bullies. He showed all his pain, sorrow, and misery through that one brown eye. I would do everything in my power to make his life better. He continued walking past me, like I wasn't there.

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The principal was looking at me with pity. Big surprise. Everybody does. Except the bullies that decide that I am a lamb in a lion’s den. I kept on walking and ran straight into a kid that looked like he could use some Weight Watcher therapies and better grades.

“Hey there,” he said. “My name’s Bill.” I knew from his crooked smile he meant trouble.
This school, I thought, is just like the others.


Hewson, Core 5


I don’t know how long I’ve been walking anymore. I know it has been days, but numbers are meaningless squiggles to my muddled brain. My rations are gone, and the backpack that contained what little bits of myself I could scavenge has been discarded, its weight too big a burden.  Sweat encases my body like a wet cocoon, and my headaches have only gotten worse now that dehydration has become a norm. All that’s left of me is the torn cargo pants sticking to my legs, my tanktop, and the indigo colored sweatshirt that’s tied around my waist. My feet are bare, resulting in a two calloused messes of caked dirt, mud, and dried blood from scabs that have repeatedly broke, making them resemble mythical monsters advancing across the desolate landscape.

The center is close now. Once a spec marking the horizon, the military base now looms, like a foot waiting to step on the miniscule bug that is me. Soon I know I’ll reach the barbed wire that surrounds their property, and the gateway in that I’ve imagined so many times since I set out. The watchtowers have already come into view, and I know it won’t be long before I can see my way into the base, and my escape from life. Weeks before this, I would’ve never imagined making this perilous journey. Weeks before this, I didn’t need an escape. Weeks before this, Maya was still alive.




Maddie, Core 6




I self consciously tugged at my teal dress and and tucked my long brown hair behind my ears. Allison smiled at me.


“Ready to go?” she said.

I nodded, and began to chew on my lip. It was one of my bad habits. I had not found a good reason to break it lately, though. I had been nervous about this banquet for the past few days. I followed Allison into Mrs. Jones’s car and quickly strapped myself in.

“Where are we going?” I asked quietly, cringing at my low voice.
I still wasn’t accustomed to speaking unless I was spoken to. Mrs. Jones smiled at me.
“A seafood restaurant near the beach.” she replied, her eyes returning to the road.
There was an awkward silence and I began to braid my hair. I hated the way it was two colors, dark brown and a light rusty brown.
“The banquet is going to be so much fun!” Allison chirped.  
Nodding, I smiled at her. I stared down at the right corner of my hand. Two freckles were 

joined together there to make a heart. The silence was there again, but I was too shy to break it.

Friday, October 3, 2014

Core 4 The Necklace Illustrations







Core 4 The Necklace - Context

           Gabe, Sophia, and John                                 
           English 7
Guy De Maupassant


  1. Born Aug 5 1850 ( in Château de Miromesnil, Dieppe )


  1. Died july 1893 ( in Passy Paris )  


  1. Popular french writer considered one of the fathers of the modern short story


  1. The writer of Star Trek, was influenced by Guy De Maupassant


  1. Wrote some 300 short stories, 6 novels, 3 travel books, 1 volume of verse,


  1. mostly wrote naturalism and realism


  1. Father was absent


  1. Parents got divorced and mom took Guy and his brother


  1. Mom became, the most influential person in his life ( mom liked Sharspeer )


  1. First story is called “ The Ball of Fat”


  1. He liked to fish and do outdoor activities


  1. Went to a private school
  1. After he graduated from college he moved to Paris and spent 10 years as a clerk at the navy department


  1. Did not like he Eiffel Tower


  1. Was Persian


  1. On January 2nd 1892, he tried to commit suicide, by cutting his throat. He was committed to the private asylum of Esporit Blanche at Passy in Paris.

Wednesday, October 1, 2014

Core #4 Examples of Irony



The three types of Irony



This clip from the "Big Bang Theory" is a clear example of dramatic irony. The person in space is oblivious to the fact that his face was treated like a page of loose-leaf. Yet the girl and all the viewers see the doodles.



This scene is from one of the best chick-flicks of all time, "She's the Man". The main character, Viola Hastings, expects the man in the shadows to be Channing Tatum when it is really just the groundskeeper, this is an example of situational irony because she expect's it to be one person and it is another.
  


In this scene Belle tells Gaston she doesn't want to marry him and makes witty remarks, one exemplifying verbal irony. When Gaston mentions their future life together Belle say's "imagine that", an example of saying one thing and meaning the other.




Core 4 Vocab List #3

Vocab List #3
Odious-
Part of speech: adjective
Definition: extremely unpleasant; repulsive
In the Story: “... and the odious cares of the kitchen.”


Disdain-
Part of speech: noun
Definition: a feeling of contempt for anything regarded as unworthy; haughty contempt; scorn
In the Story: “... she threw the invitation on the table with disdain…”


Immoderate-
Part of speech: adjective
Definition: not moderate; exceeding just or reasonable limits; excessive
In the Story: “...and her heart began to beat with an immoderate desire.”


Askew-
Part of speech: adjective
Definition: crooked; awry
In the Story: “With frowsy hair, skirts askew, and red hands…”


Perceive-
Part of speech: verb
Definition: to become aware of, know or identify by means of the senses
In the Story: “... she suddenly perceived a woman who was leading a child.”


Anteroom-
Part of speech: Noun
Definition: a room that admits to a larger room; a waiting room
In the story: “Her husband had been sleeping since midnight, in a little deserted anteroom, with three other gentlemen…”  


Dowry-
Part of speech: noun
Definition: the money, goods, or estate that a wife brings to her husband at marriage
In the Story: “She had no dowry, no expectations, no means of being known…”


Anguish-  
Part of speech: Noun
Definition: Excruciating or acute distress, suffering, or pain

In the Story: “Then she asked, hesitating, filled with anguish: ‘Can you lend me that, only that?’”

Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Core 4 Vocab List 2


                                           Vocab List # 2

Dominions

Part of Speech: noun
Definition: The power or right of governing and controlling; sovereign authority.
In the Story: “When his dominions were half depopulated, he summoned to his presence a thousand hale and light-hearted friends from among the knights and and dames…”

Dauntless

Part of Speech: adjective
Definition: not to be daunted or intimidated; fearless; intrepid; bold
In the Story: ”But, the Prince Prospero was happy and dauntless and sagacious.”

Pestilence

Part of Speech: noun
Definition: A  deadly or epidemic disease
In the Story:  “No pestilence had ever been so fatal, or so hideous.”
Buffoon

Part of Speech: noun
Definition: a person who amuses other people with tricks, jokes, odd gestures, etc.
In the Story: “There were buffoons, there were improvisatori, there were ballet-dancers…”

Countenance

Part of Speech: noun
Definition: appearance, especially the look or expression in the face.
In the Story: “ … and produced so wild a look upon the countenances, of those who entered…”

Delirious

Part of Speech: adjective
Definition: In a state of wild excitement or ecstasy.
In the Story: “There were delirious fancies such as the madman fashions.”

Grotesque

Part of Speech: adjective
Definition: having an “odd or unnatural in shape, appearance, or character; fantastically ugly or absurd; bizarre.
In the Story: “Be sure they were grotesque.”



Ruddier

Part of Speech: adjective
Definition: Having a fresh healthy red color.
In the Story: “There flows ruddier laughter…“

Core 4 Setting & Atmosphere Notes

*The Setting of the story The Masque Of The Red Death takes place in a castle that has 7  apartments during the red death in the country of Prince Prospero. The specific setting of the story is during a Masquerade.
*The Atmosphere of the story The Masque Of The Red Death is very creepiness, bleakness, and (like all Edgar Allen Poe stories) death.
*The image created by The Masque Of The Red Death is a country ridden with blood disease that has one prince who had the foresight to build a castle to protect him from people who had it.